I lie down on the bed. I am exhausted. Emotionally. Mentally. I try to sleep. I check the watch. It’s nine thirty. Too early to sleep. Too late to stay awake. In the conveyor belt of my mind, I check each tag of the luggage it carries to check which ones mine…
Sleep.
Try to sleep.
Sleep
Sleep
X
Y
X
Y
X
X
Confused
Darkness
Love
Hate
Hate = love?
Close your eyes
Empty the mind
Sleep
Sleep
Fill the emptiness
Fill my darkness
Fill my heart
Close your eyes you fool
Close
Last kiss
Smile
My eyes close and I am still smiling…
7 comments:
During day,
we make a card castle.
Sleep take them one by one.
what remains after the last card?
Peace.
Will you pawn peace for a card castle?
liked the structure of thought.
mip
Cute... i found it cute...
Don't be confused. The answer is there right in your post. Empty your mind before going to sleep and enjoy the peace.
you have some intresting blog over here... after reading those serious blog or poems or short stories its fun and refreshing to actually read about a person in plain simple to the point language... read some of your posts... hope to finish it soon...
I can completely identify with that state of mind - when your mind suggests sleep and your heart cannot help drowning in that mesmerizing, enchanting feeling and you cannot help floating in the moments...
Here's wishing you many more of these... :)
Dear MIP,
I never took anybody's advise, but when it is said in such beautiful words... it's hard to resist. Glad you liked it :)
Dear Puneet,
Thanks so much
Old Monk, I wish emptying the mind was so easy... my mind works at double speed before sleeping. All ideas come either when I am about to sleep or when I am commuting.
Dear Raghav,
Thanks. Hope you keep enjoying.
Hi Prakriti,
Yeah... it is a nice feeling, atleast when u know the only thing u are gonna do next is sleep :)
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